tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1045611158824613366.post5059082537719319745..comments2023-07-04T06:57:30.885-04:00Comments on Salt-Rain Tidings: Gogyohka-Thursday [62]L.E. Fiorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11017788191879150988noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1045611158824613366.post-28515133197440101932011-12-05T08:53:01.113-05:002011-12-05T08:53:01.113-05:00Mmm, yes, "walk in the stillness" is mor...Mmm, yes, "walk in the stillness" is more poetic, D.N. :-) (me too... ;-) :-))<br /><br />And that's exactly what I thought- J.T.- "break" sounds harsh... and I like the harmonic imagine of two friends walking in stillness *together* ... but... to the extent that the poem is not imagination/poetic license but a reflection of an actual experience- some of the rooms weren't so "sanctuary" like and were actually frightening- and then I wished for a friend who'd break the echoing of my own two feet. 'guess that needs its own poem. :-)L.E. Fiorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11017788191879150988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1045611158824613366.post-24277077990950348202011-12-05T01:43:58.987-05:002011-12-05T01:43:58.987-05:00Walking in the stillness. To break wish it seems h...Walking in the stillness. To break wish it seems harsh. To talk in it makes you and your friend a part of the art. :-)J.T. Edelbluthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05073730789112550605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1045611158824613366.post-49547380807023614872011-12-05T00:39:15.529-05:002011-12-05T00:39:15.529-05:00'walk in the stillness'
sounds a little mo...'walk in the stillness'<br />sounds a little more.......poetic, fluid I guess.<br />we wish you could have both though ;)D. N. Rainshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15865245963865342308noreply@blogger.com