March 8, 2012

Gogyohka-Thursday [76]

Waiting, outside the door,

afraid to knock.

Afraid he'll tell me, "Go away!"

Afraid she doesn't have time to play.

Afraid no one's waiting, anyway.



  1. I really like this poem. I was searching poetry blogs on blogger and happened upon yours. Great work :)

  2. Thank you very much! Glad to be found! :-) Enjoy! :-)

  3. Very clever! I can certainly relate to this, as I often watched my little brother walk up to his best friends house and his mom would answer, then my brother would walk back with a sullen face, (I knew what had happened)

    Great work, I like this one. :)