
Gogyohka was invented partly to solve the problem of international poetry (it is almost impossible to translate English Haiku into Japanese as the syllable ratio is, quite frankly, a nightmare) but it was also meant to open up poetry to a wider audience. With Gogyohka there are no rhymes, no counting syllables, no nature-only edicts, just harmony of thought. Try it. It's heaps of fun. I've been writing it for about a year and a half now and it is a delight to be able to take your ideas and emotions and refine them into a concise thought. I'll be trying to post at least one every Thursday. Enjoy!
To start off, here's one of the first ones I wrote:
bed time
so early
when across the world
people
are still dancing
Gogyohka! :)
ReplyDeletedelightful :)
ReplyDeleteCharming form
ReplyDeletea challenge
that calls me
why not
try it?
Well done, glad I stopped by!
Thanks, HisFireFly. Isn't it easy and fun? :-)
ReplyDeleteSmall girl
ReplyDeleteturning globe
wondering why
down under
isn't upside down
Is this one? I'm a newborn baby at any poetry form! I'm intrigued though....Help! Yours prompted this memory...
This is fun. I tried it. :)
ReplyDeleteHey, Kathleen-
ReplyDeleteYes! You did it! Welcome to poetry. :-) The beauty of Gogyohka is, other than five lines, there really are no rules! :-)
five
lines
just
like
that
[Though, of course, turn of phrase, content, and word patterns all play into what distinguishes a Gogyohka poem from a "good Gogyohka poem."]
yay! glad to share the fun!!!
baby comes
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resting in womb
family
waits
Mmm, oh, I like that one. :-)
ReplyDeleteHmmm I like this a lot... I'm like a Japanese/Chinese culture addict XD
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