Gogyohka (五行歌) is a Japanese form of poetry (spin off the Tanka) created by Enta Kusakebe in the 1960s. For those of you already familiar with Haiku- it is the same idea however there are no syllable counts or content restrictions and there are five lines instead of three. The emphasis is on brevity and the breath. Where one would breath, pause, or an idea breaks-- there you break the line.
Gogyohka was invented partly to solve the problem of international poetry (it is almost impossible to translate English Haiku into Japanese as the syllable ratio is, quite frankly, a nightmare) but it was also meant to open up poetry to a wider audience. With Gogyohka there are no rhymes, no counting syllables, no nature-only edicts, just harmony of thought. Try it. It's heaps of fun. I've been writing it for about a year and a half now and it is a delight to be able to take your ideas and emotions and refine them into a concise thought. I'll be trying to post at least one every Thursday. Enjoy!
To start off, here's one of the first ones I wrote:
bed time
so early
when across the world
people
are still dancing
Gogyohka! :)
ReplyDeletedelightful :)
ReplyDeleteCharming form
ReplyDeletea challenge
that calls me
why not
try it?
Well done, glad I stopped by!
Thanks, HisFireFly. Isn't it easy and fun? :-)
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ReplyDeleteturning globe
wondering why
down under
isn't upside down
Is this one? I'm a newborn baby at any poetry form! I'm intrigued though....Help! Yours prompted this memory...
This is fun. I tried it. :)
ReplyDeleteHey, Kathleen-
ReplyDeleteYes! You did it! Welcome to poetry. :-) The beauty of Gogyohka is, other than five lines, there really are no rules! :-)
five
lines
just
like
that
[Though, of course, turn of phrase, content, and word patterns all play into what distinguishes a Gogyohka poem from a "good Gogyohka poem."]
yay! glad to share the fun!!!
baby comes
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resting in womb
family
waits
Mmm, oh, I like that one. :-)
ReplyDeleteHmmm I like this a lot... I'm like a Japanese/Chinese culture addict XD
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